Monday, June 13, 2011

essay

Today our teacher gave back our chinese paper. paper 1 & 2. Most of them wrote about the smile ^^,including me. still rmb the day after chinese paper 1 exam sherene came n asked me which 1 i wrote, i said i wrote bout the smile one. then she said tat one suit me. really? haha.

back to this
i read some of my friend's essay. i like zun yip and jiwei's essay~
jiwei: 怎么办?怎么办?haha
zun yip's essay used a special way to bring out the meaning. i like the sentence, bt i cant rmb the whole sentence. agak-agak is 我是阿雄,是个盲人,可以告诉我这个世界美丽吗,如果美就捐点钱,让我知道这个世界有多美。zun yip can help me to correct it? hehe

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